My blogging experience

 
My experience in this first partial is very good; I discovered so many things about this language. My favorite theme is the past tense because I know things over the theme and the theme that is more difficult to me is the present continuous because I not have the necessary know, but I try to improve. This everything about this partial.

WRITING EXAM

MY FAVORITE VACATION

This time, I write about my favorite vacation. My favorite vacation was when I was 16 years old; I traveled with my family to Veracruz beach and other places around the region.

In first place, we went to the beach, I love the beach and it is, my little sister´s favorite place , I played with my family every day. And next, we went to see another beach whit  a particularity, the beach is into a rock, the name of the beach is “Roca partida”. But when I and my family arrived the place it, started to rain and their air blow with hard force. For this reason, I return to the hotel and next to my house.

My family doesn’t travel with frequency, but I enjoy the little travels with them. This is my favorite vacation, this is everything.

In my original text I have some mistakes , the principal mistakes are verbs tenses.

MY FAVORITE QUOTE

This time I talk about my favorite quote, I explain at I don't have only favorite quote and I write my favorites quotes. For other side, relative to the grammar, I am better in my time writing, but I have some mistakes.

MY GREATEST ACHIEVEMENT

In this occasion the teacher leaves do a homework in that I had to explain which is my greatest achievement.