MY FAVORITE VACATION
This time,
I write about my favorite vacation. My favorite vacation was when I was 16
years old; I traveled with my family to Veracruz beach and other places around
the region.
In first
place, we went to the beach, I love the beach and it is, my little sister´s
favorite place , I played with my family every day. And next, we went to see
another beach whit a particularity, the
beach is into a rock, the name of the beach is “Roca partida”. But when I and
my family arrived the place it, started to rain and their air blow with hard
force. For this reason, I return to the hotel and next to my house.
My family
doesn’t travel with frequency, but I enjoy the little travels with them. This is
my favorite vacation, this is everything.
In my original text I have some mistakes , the principal mistakes are verbs tenses.
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